eleanors english blog
Tuesday, 11 December 2012
Battery hens and free range hens
In this answer i am going to discuss the differnce between a battery hen kept egg and a free range egg. A battery hen egg is where the hen has been kept in a battery cage a lot of farmers use these because its more efficient and saves a lot of space. A battery hen is also isn't fresh and is sat amongst all the chickens dirt before sent to the shops. A battery egg is also feed through a tube through the cage bars and are forced into a cage from the moment they are born until the moment they die with no space or freedom at all. On the other hand free range hens eggs are left to run around in a large open environment which makes them more relaxed and they produce much larger and fresher eggs. Battery hens are kept cooped up in a dark and unhealthy environment with warm air blowing in at them 24/7 and no sun light is let in. Them being in such a confined space close to a lot of other chicken also causes them to loose there feathers. When one hen becomes ill in the battery farm every hen in there is given antibiotics where as in the free range egg farm the one hen that gets ill is taken And treated individually.Free range hens are much healthier due to the fact they have fresh air, space and the right products to live that healthy life.
Friday, 7 December 2012
iPad rules
Handle with care,
Don't hit the iPad lightly tap it,
Don't mess about with it,
Don't steal it,
Don't brake it,
Don't wonder around the class room with it,
Use your common sense,
When sir tells you to close the lid close it,
Stay on what your supposed to,
Don't go on any sites that you shouldn't.
Don't hit the iPad lightly tap it,
Don't mess about with it,
Don't steal it,
Don't brake it,
Don't wonder around the class room with it,
Use your common sense,
When sir tells you to close the lid close it,
Stay on what your supposed to,
Don't go on any sites that you shouldn't.
Tuesday, 27 November 2012
McDonald's
A man is playing tennis and he is trying his hardest when his wife Walks in. his wife had been to McDonald's to get a 99p cheese burger. This is like saying you can be late for anything as long as McDonald's is involved. This advert is obviously produced by McDonald,
Wednesday, 10 October 2012
mountaineers
5 German mountaineers attempted to climb switzerlands 155 foot mountain. When they were on the decet of the mountain they hit rock solid ice under the snow. Thinking it was safe they still carried on with the decent. Unfortunatly it was not as safe as they though. As they were climbing up the mountain there was heavy rain and then a snow storm the next day. When they got to the top of the mountain the all seriously douted climbing down that day incase they did slip. They very unfortunatly took the risk and slipped down the mountain bringing them to a painful death. 2 of the mountaineers were at a very young age at 14 and 20 they were traviling up with there dads and his frend. One of there fathers stopped half way because he didn't feel well. The father of the 14 year old was the only to survive.
Tuesday, 2 October 2012
£1.74
If i was homeless and had £1.74 i would buy a 2 litre bottle of 20p water from asda this would keep me hydraed and when i had finished with the bottle i could use water fountains or the public toilets water to fill it up so i was etting a drink ever day. I would use 50p to buy some food anything cheep i could find. I would use the public toilets and if you had to pay then i wold have change so i could pay for them. For shelter i would sleep in door ways or under bus shelters or find a hostel and go in there.
Sunday, 23 September 2012
homlesness in the uk
1) There are many homeless people dealing with addiction issues-drugs,alcohol.
2)There are some homeless people that were abused as children so they do not feel safe in a closed unit.
3) There are the young teens out that were sexually assaulted at home and feel safer outside with others.
4)There are those that prefer living outside on the streets and do not want a home.
5)There is a percentage of homeles peopele that are mentally unable to hold a home long term.
2)There are some homeless people that were abused as children so they do not feel safe in a closed unit.
3) There are the young teens out that were sexually assaulted at home and feel safer outside with others.
4)There are those that prefer living outside on the streets and do not want a home.
5)There is a percentage of homeles peopele that are mentally unable to hold a home long term.
Monday, 17 September 2012
tension homework (touching the void)
How does the writer structure the text to bring tension to the reader?
The writer structures his text by using strong words and strongly worded pharses such as "torture" he is explaning his time on the mountain like the worst thing possible. He exadurates what he is feeling by using this word, trying to show how he feels to the people reading it. He also says "an awful weariness washed through me, and with it a fervent hope that this endless hanging would soon be over" this makes the reader feel abit sorry for joe and what has happened to is leg and sort of puts the reader in his shoes an what he would have been feelig whilst hanging on a ropeuable to do anything and realying on hs friend.
The fears and thoughts which he shares with the reader
The writer does this by explaining what it was like hanging from this rope. He got to the point were he thought it was so bad he was going to drive his friend to a most certain death. No one could hear him and so he was almost certain that there was no hope for him and his friend. He thinks to himself that he is going to die the way he never wanted ad people wouldn't no what had happened to them and they would never be found. This makes the reader wonder what was going to happen to them both and that he would rather die than complete the mountain's challange.
The way the passage ends
He says that what happened was what he wanted. It leaves the reader wondering if they survived or weather they died. It makes people wonder what else happened and makes them want to read on. It makes people wonder if they were saved or if he shouted load enough and his friend as able to hear him and save both there lives.
The writer structures his text by using strong words and strongly worded pharses such as "torture" he is explaning his time on the mountain like the worst thing possible. He exadurates what he is feeling by using this word, trying to show how he feels to the people reading it. He also says "an awful weariness washed through me, and with it a fervent hope that this endless hanging would soon be over" this makes the reader feel abit sorry for joe and what has happened to is leg and sort of puts the reader in his shoes an what he would have been feelig whilst hanging on a ropeuable to do anything and realying on hs friend.
The fears and thoughts which he shares with the reader
The writer does this by explaining what it was like hanging from this rope. He got to the point were he thought it was so bad he was going to drive his friend to a most certain death. No one could hear him and so he was almost certain that there was no hope for him and his friend. He thinks to himself that he is going to die the way he never wanted ad people wouldn't no what had happened to them and they would never be found. This makes the reader wonder what was going to happen to them both and that he would rather die than complete the mountain's challange.
The way the passage ends
He says that what happened was what he wanted. It leaves the reader wondering if they survived or weather they died. It makes people wonder what else happened and makes them want to read on. It makes people wonder if they were saved or if he shouted load enough and his friend as able to hear him and save both there lives.
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